A Micro Fiction Piece
There is a fantastic flow to this, like you could sing it. Nearly mythic and can easily be seen as a dark fairytale.
Thank you, I appreciate it so much!
Breathtaking 🙌
Thank you 🙏
What an amazing write Artemis, just loved it! The words and painting came together here and a very nice twist. Love 🖤
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it <3
What a beautiful piece of writing. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you <3
I reread this again today. The imagery is so great, and I love the end. Really wonderful.
Thank you so much, I’m glad you enjoyed it <3
Nice!
If you could spare the time please read my piece yesterday. Thank you.
Thank you for reading my story!! I actually read your most recent and really enjoyed it!
Thank you, I appreciate that. Means a lot to me. - Shain
I see what you did there. You put me in a space where I felt a sense of safety and you flipped it on us. Well done! Love this one!!!
Nice trick ending caught me by surprise cool
I was literally thinking to myself “huh this kinda reminds me of locusts swarming” and then bang, I called it 😅
👏👏😂
Oh damn, that ending, though! Wow, yeah, this counts for the challenge, haha. I did NOT expect that dark turn in the final moments, but I am here for it! 😂
Glad you enjoyed it! And glad the twist wasn’t obvious from the beginning haha
Haha, no I didn’t see it coming. You lulled me into a false sense of security with the warm and inviting atmosphere and the painting itself as well.
There is a fantastic flow to this, like you could sing it. Nearly mythic and can easily be seen as a dark fairytale.
Thank you, I appreciate it so much!
Breathtaking 🙌
Thank you 🙏
What an amazing write Artemis, just loved it! The words and painting came together here and a very nice twist. Love 🖤
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it <3
What a beautiful piece of writing. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you <3
I reread this again today. The imagery is so great, and I love the end. Really wonderful.
Thank you so much, I’m glad you enjoyed it <3
Nice!
If you could spare the time please read my piece yesterday. Thank you.
Thank you for reading my story!! I actually read your most recent and really enjoyed it!
Thank you, I appreciate that. Means a lot to me. - Shain
I see what you did there. You put me in a space where I felt a sense of safety and you flipped it on us. Well done! Love this one!!!
Nice trick ending caught me by surprise cool
I was literally thinking to myself “huh this kinda reminds me of locusts swarming” and then bang, I called it 😅
👏👏😂
Oh damn, that ending, though! Wow, yeah, this counts for the challenge, haha. I did NOT expect that dark turn in the final moments, but I am here for it! 😂
Glad you enjoyed it! And glad the twist wasn’t obvious from the beginning haha
Haha, no I didn’t see it coming. You lulled me into a false sense of security with the warm and inviting atmosphere and the painting itself as well.