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Keith Long's avatar

This is intense! I really like it, the way the reader isn't sure what's happening in same way the mc feels. Excellent

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Artemis's avatar

Thank you! Her disorientation is such an important part of the piece so I’m glad it comes across to readers too

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Wow, Artemis, I just finished reading this for this week’s episode of my podcast since it’s one of the shout outs, and I am absolutely blown away by the quality of your writing.

Your style is unique and elegant. I love the way this story flows and how vivid the imagery is without every sacrificing a single drop of the atmosphere or pacing.

Excited to talk about it on the show, but had to shout out the amazing work here!

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Artemis's avatar

Thank you, this means so much to me! I’m so glad the story felt vivid to you; atmosphere and immersion are always something I try for. I really appreciate your kind words, and I’m excited to tune in to the podcast!

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Brynn Hanna's avatar

Wow! This had me gripping the edge of my seat. Beautifully written

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Artemis's avatar

Thank you, I’m so glad you enjoyed it!

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