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Shain Parwiz's avatar

Through the light of strange stars, Ingrid sees the woman that dissolves onto the sand.- this has to be my favorite line. You painted a picture in my head so clearly. Thank you-Shain

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Artemis's avatar

Wow thank you so much, that line’s a particular favorite of mine too!

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Emi's avatar

So so so so so good! I loved how suspenseful and spooky it was!

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Tyler Sehn's avatar

Intense! I found myself rooting for Ingrid to make it through. Maybe she did, in a way, with the help of the Good Ones

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Artemis's avatar

Thank you for reading! I was rooting for Ingrid, too... I like to think there was definitely some hope for her.

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Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

This is good; shades of Homer's Odyssey here. I like it!

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Artemis's avatar

Thank you so much!

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williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

Good story enjoyed

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Artemis's avatar

Thank you 🙏

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Okay, the description of the SIREN KILLSSSSSSS. This whole piece was enchanting in itself AND the ending physically had me grimacing. Great work

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